一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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October11th,2013.Sunday.sunny.Today i get up early,after breakfast,i reading book about half an hour.Then i do my homework .After finished homework,I help mother to clean desk and floor.In the afternoon,i played table tennis with my good friend Lisa wang.We enjoy ourself very much.In the evening,I wicth TV with my mother.What a good day.