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Illidan know the destruction of the well of eternity would make him unable to derive the magical energy from there, so he selfishly betrayed their compatriots, ran to the upper elves squeal. Because of his desire for the magical energy and malfurion's jealousy, illidan to betray his brother didn't feel guilty. Anyway, illidan had vowed to do whatever it takes to preserve the energy of the well of eternity. Malfurion was torn illidan betrayal, he led his companions azshara temple deeply, when they entered the temple's main hall, the upper elves are singing their final mantras, dark spell in the depth of the well of eternity has created a huge whirlpool. When sargeras vast shadow is above the water, ? m method
