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On November 20, 1999, China's first unmanned experimental spacecraft "shenzhou" spacecraft in jiuquan, 21 hours in central Inner Mongolia recovery after a successful landing, the successful completion of the "virgin". The flight success for China's manned spacecraft god laying a very solid foundation. In 2003, "shenzhou v" carrying the first Chinese astronaut Yang liwei into space. In 2008, "shenzhou seven" carrying three astronauts into space, zhai zhigang completed extravehicular walk for the first time. Shenzhou 1 November 20, 1999 the first test flight, successful implementation between heaven and earth. The shenzhou ii January 09, 2001 the first ship ZhengYang unmanned spacecraft. The main purpose of the flight test is from launch to run each system in engineering, return, to keep track the whole process of evaluation, test the technology side ?