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For the fifth lunar month every year Dragon Boat Festival, also called DuanYangJie, afternoon day festival, may festival, etc. The Dragon Boat Festival originated in China, the original is a festival of the Chinese people with illnesses and epidemic prevention, then legend patriotic poet qu yuan died on this day, also became the Chinese han people commemorate qu yuan's traditional festivals, with around a brilliant, a solitary chu qu, which spread all over China, folk culture sharing, qu yuan of the well known celebrities, back to the pure feelings of the Chinese nation. But parts have commemorating wu zixu, Cao E said, wu and yue in the dragon boat boatrace tribal totem worship in this day custom is earlier than in the spring and autumn. The Dragon Boat Festival eating zongzi, dragon boat racing, hang calamus, wormwood, folium artemisiae argyi, rhizoma atractylodis, radix angelicae, drinking realgar ?
