托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者在句法层面做的很棒；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Titan did not seem to realize sargeras destroyed order plan, they continue to from one world to another world, according to their willingness to shape the world, and make them to order the new ruling. During the journey, they came to a small world, the world was later called azeroth, in this land of disarray, titans met a lot of elementals against them. These elementals belief with a very evil race known as the god of ancient times, and refused to let the Titan change their world. The gods of the gods of ancient times, is worried about the evil habits, and they sent troops to combat element creatures and their evil master. The god of ancient times army led by chief of elements with the strongest .