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Titan to their order in the continent is satisfied, then decided to leave azeroth departure. Before they leave the titans decided to give the continent's most powerful species in order to protect the world and to defend the balance is not damaged. In that era, there are many dragon, they ruled by five dragons, respectively. Titans chose this five dragons to guard the new world. The strongest gods, respectively, a portion of its own power donative a dragon, the five dragon known as guardian dragon. The father of the gods of Oman searle gives part of his power to huge bronze dragon notts doms. The father of the gods to give notts daum responsibility in order to protect the road of time and fate, indifferent to the noble .