采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;请注意分段。
In the human and the orc war ten thousand years ago, the world is only a piece of azeroth surrounded by boundless sea of vast land, the continent known as kalimdor. Many different RACES and creatures live in the land, to fight the bad natural environment. In the center of the dark continent is a full of mysterious energy lake, the lake - it was later called the well of eternity - is the world of magic and the source of natural energy, in the darkness draw energy from outside this world at the same time, the well of eternity to the entire world continue to release its energy, provide nutrition for a variety of creatures in the world. I do not know since when, a composed of action in the night creatures original .
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