2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，词汇量总体偏小，注意词汇拼写的检查；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Taobao is a bigger network retail business circle, the asia-pacific region by the alibaba group, founded on May 10, 2003 investment. Taobao now business across C2C (individual) to the individual, B2C (business to individual) of two parts. As of December 31, 2010, taobao registered more than 370 million members; 2011 volumes of 610.08 billion yuan, accounting for 80% of the Chinese online shopping market. Growth of 66% over 2010. On November 11, 2012, taobao daily turnover of 19.1 billion yuan.