小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Survived from the big bang of the night elves climbed the coarsely raft, slowly to view the only visible in the land. Fortunately, under the protection of the moon goddess, elune, malfurion and tyrande and in cenarius survived the reckoning. Tired agree they survived the leadership of the people's heroes to set up a new home. In the night elves silence of the journey, they saw the remains of the earth, and is aware of their enthusiasm of magic led to the terrible disaster. Though sargeras and his burning legion was devastated by the destruction of the well of eternity, malfurion and his companions have to think about the price for this victory. There are still many upper elves surviving ? in the big bang .