初中英语命题作文真题演练(69):长大后

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I grew up to become an architect. So I began very early to see about architectural books. At the same time in school I also dare not relax, concentrate on the completion of each thing, to develop their own careful personality. I must be an architect.So now I have to work hard, persist own dream, toward the shore of success