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Said movement, I like the most is football. Remember the way home from school, I saw a round ball on the side of the road. So I picked it up. From then on, I often play with my classmates, also gradually know this thing called football. With the increase in the number of exercises, my skill is getting better, whether the striker or midfielder, I can do. My biggest wish is to become a football star like Beckham, led the team to the world stage Chinese.