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Dear Mike, How are you getting on with everything? I’ve got some good news to tell you. I was officially selection for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games volunteer, so I was very happy.My service jobs are outside the assembly hall "guide guide", the service time is 7 days, from August 12 to 18.So I need to further improve the English, familiar with the articles of association of the volunteers.I'm sure I can do. I really hope you can come to Beijing to witness such a great event. Yours, Li Hua
