3. 参考词汇:代沟―generation gap
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Uncle, How are you these days? I’m writing to tell you my trouble with my parents. Asked too much for me to learn, they are not up to their expectations, and often than his and her neighbor's children, let oneself depressed.They are not allowed to be I watch TV, Internet, also not I make friends with girls.I think I have a generation gap with their parents, not good communication I would be grateful if you could do me a favor to talk to my parents and persuade them to change the way of education. I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Yours, Li Yi