2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(120):交流学生

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；句式变化多样；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；请注意分段。

In the UK, any secondary student over 15 can get a part-time job in his spare time. But they can work no more than three hours a day or 18 hours a week during the school year,and they are not allowed to work after 7: pm. In my opinion, taking a part-time job is beneficial, for first of all, teenagers can clean some working skills, such as how to fill out an application, how to do well in an interview and how to get along with co-workers and bosses. What’s more, taking a part- time job offers us a chance to learn to deal with our money properly. Above all, we may not only feel more confident when facing difficulties, but also learn to solve problems more independently , and develop responsibility for our work and study .