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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；请注意分段。
he come into one of those houses with his friends.Because those houses are very old,he get injured .His father is very angry about the accident,but also worried.From then on,he never play there again.So if you want to know something better,you should do it by yourself.As a student,we also should learn how to live by ourselves.
