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As we see,some people believe that the lucky number can bring them good luck.That is really?We all know,those information are from entertainment of TV show or magic book.there just want to appeal to audience's eyes so that increase business benefit.For example,some number of six,seven,two that could bring good luck in their mind. As a matter of fact,this isn't scientific.The following of reason are those:First how many successful people who succeed is because of the lucky numbles bring them to be?The answer is Noboby.They strugle for their dream with their two hands.Second,the chance is leaveing for who people has prepared forever,do not to waiting for good luck base on lucky numble. I think that the lucky is always not connect with the number,we should insist on believe science.