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5．可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。
Dear Mr. Smith, I was so pleased to hear from you,now I am writing to tell you something about my school and school life. Our school was built in 1990. There are 48 classes with 3200 students and 280 teachers in it. As long as you enter the school gate, you will see the library with over 200, 000 books. In the science hall, there are many physics and chemical laboratories and four sound labs. The teaching building can hold sixty classes. I’m studying in Class4, Grade 1. The main subjects include Chinese, maths, English physics, chemistry and computer.English and computer are the subjects that I love most, and I am very good at them. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music, especially Jason Mraz.Swimming and skating as well. I hope you will come and visit some day. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
