2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(43):音乐爱好

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear that you didn't get along well with your head teacher. From your letter I knew you are a music fan. So it is with me. As every one knows, music can be a good companion, which can bring you happiness and make you relaxed, forgetting worries from life. One can’t live without music.There is no doubt that you have a great passion for music. If you enjoy music in a proper time as well as in a proper way, you can keep on studying in a better state. in my view, I think you should understand your teacher’s intention. He just cared too much about you. He didm't mean to blame you.You’d better have a heart-to-heart talk with him so that you can understand each other much better. I’m sure music is the bridge to the soul. Good luck! Tom