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学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
It is really exciting that our school will offer many optional courses, from which we can choose four. The courses can be listed as follows: sports, music, science, business, literature, drawing, cooking, clothing design, architecture, and film directing. To my excitement, the courses include my favorites. I’m eager to learn sports, film directing,drawing and music. As a boy, I have great interest in sports，especially football！I always have a dream to be a professional football player. And the reason why I would like to choose film directing is that I think making a film is amazing.There are many fantastic firms I like，I also want to make them as these talented directors do.When it comes to drawing, I believe knowing something about art is a must for our spear time.Above all, music is my best love. Music can bring me calmness and relaxation，it can take my sadness and worries away as well. From my perspective, optional courses can build a bridge , leading us to touch the real world. Not only can we develop our interests, but also put the knowledge into practice. Only in this way can we gain wholesome development.
