2010年湖南高考测试题写作范文：毕业留言

作者词汇量积累很好，学术词汇积累要重视；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

Dear Li Hua, It’s time to say goodbye as well as go for our own dreams. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.I will still care about you even if you're not here with me. Still remember that night two years ago? It's a Competition Day which Germany against Urugary.It's difficult for me to watch it because I was badly ill as well as I lied in bed.Unexpectly you came to me with a radio.We listened to the broadcast all night long. I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!I wish you happy,luck will be accompany.Overcome the difficulty.Very brave and beauty.Everything will be OK.Unhappy will be away！ Yours, Wang Ping