3. 生词:谦虚的 humble自私的 selfish
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In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.Therefore, it is very important for us to know how to get along well with other people. To get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following words. To begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean. Lies will surely make people stay far away from us in the long run. Lies can never changes fact.After all,honesty is the best policy. Secondly, we have to be humble enough. If we are proud in public, we can hardly win others’ respect, not to mention "friendship" Finally, we must not be selfish. We should learn how to show concern for others. As long as we do as what is mentioned above, we will find it easy to get along well with others.