高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Nanjing is Jiangsu Province provincial capital, vice-provincial level city, long triangle vice-key city. Ancient name Jinling, abbreviation rather. Is situated at east the Changjiang zhongxiayou the Soviet Anhui two province intersection points, Jiangsu Province north west. East is apart from the Shanghai 300 kilometers. East meets Jiangsu Province Zhenjiang, Jurong, west the neighbour Anhui Province Chuzhou (Lai'an County, south Qiao Qu, Quanjiao County), Chaohu (and county), Ma'anshan (the Jinjiazhuang area, flowered mountainous area, rain mountainous area, Dangtu County), south meets Anhui Xuancheng (Xuanzhou District, Langxi County), Jiangsu Province Liyang, north continually Jiangsu Province Yizheng, Anhui Province Tianchang. Cross Yangtze River both banks, north and south biggest latitude 140 kilometers, thing biggest departure 80 kilometers, area of jurisdiction total area 6598 square kilometers. Urban district area 4844 square kilometers, built-up district area 513 square kilometers.