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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(83):Graduation and Moving on

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:50浏览次数:270
要求:
从学校毕业,或上大学,或步入社会,毕业意味着前进、意味着选择。请以Graduation and Moving on为题,写一篇100词左右的毕业感言。

要求:

毕业前活动:照相、留言等;2心情(依依不舍,又要前进)及原因等。首句已经给出,不计入总词数。

注意:

1.字数100左右  

2.表达要连贯。


Graduation and Moving on

Graduation is a time when we move on,from school to university,or out into the real world.  

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作者词汇量积累很好,学术词汇积累要重视;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。

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Graduation and Moving on Graduation is a time when we move on,from school to university,or out into the real world.Before graduating from school,We usually have a variety of activities,like taking pictures,leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship,or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect.However, I have mixed emotions about moving on.I want to stay and have more fun with my friends, but I will have to move on.Graduation means taking a step forward―moving onward and upward.Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced.After all,there is always hope.And what's more,there is something good in the world and it is worth fighting for.Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well.You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted. Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not.Let’s make efforts so that our dream will come true.

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