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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(46):How to Get on with Our Parents

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:03浏览次数:855
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作为中学生,请以How to Get on with Our Parents为题,从以下几个方面写一篇短文。


1.相同的问题:父母对我们什么都要管。
2.父母总是什么都担心,他们说目的是为了让我们健康幸福地成长。

3.解决问题的办法:我们理解父母,也让父母理解我们。


注意:
1.词数100左右
2.可适当增加内容细节,使全文连贯。

3.开头已经给出。


How to Get on with Our Parents
As middle school students,
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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As middle school students, we often have the same problem. Our parents care for everything we do as well as take control of everything we are going to do. They always tell us what we should do,they also make plans for us without asking our attitude. And they always stop us doing what we like to do. However, as parents, they have to worn about things for us. From the time we were born they worry about what we eat, how much sleep we get and how we behave at school. All these things are part of their lives. In fact they expect us to grow up healthily and live happily.We all wish to make friends with our parents. We should understand them and also make ourselves understood. Maybe that will help us to get on well with our parents.

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