作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Sports in Our School Sports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E.classes a week.And we have at least one hour to exercise every day. Students get so excite at these changes More and more students take an active part in the ball game.Running and jumping on the playground.Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.It”s good for you to keep heathy and your study will be better。