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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5479
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

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As we see,some people believe that the lucky number can bring them good luck.That is really?We all know,the information are from entertainment of TV show or magic book.There just want to appeal to audience's eyes so that increase business income.For example,some number of six,seven,two that could bring good luck in their mind. As a matter of fact,this isn't scientific.The following of reason are those:First how many successful people who succeed is because of the lucky numbles bring them to be?The answer is Noboby.They strugle for their dream with their two hands.Second,the chance is leaveing for who people has prepared forever,do not to waiting for good luck base on lucky numble. I think that the lucky is always not connect with the number,we should insist on believe science.

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