赞同:
重现该园辉煌景象;
中华文明具体体现;反对:
保留原样更为合理;
警醒人们不忘过去;参考词汇:
故宫 the Palace Museum;颐和园 the Summer Palace
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt? Yuanmingyuan. “Garden Of all gardens”, was burnt down in l860. Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not. Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing 50 can we see the original sight of the garden, which no wonder reflects the Chinese civilization. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history. Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it is not necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district. So you see, opinions vary and it's hard to say which is right and which is not.