2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(48):北京旅游

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；连词使用偏少。

Dear John, I’m so glad to know that you are coming to Beijing. It so happens that my brother will be away on business through 18 ― 24, so you can stay with us if you like. I’ve made a 5-day schedule for you: the Great Wall (on 18, Day 1), Beihai Park and my school (Day 2), the Summer Palace (Day 3), the Forbidden City and the Tian’anmen Square (Day 4). Nothing special is planned for Day 5. You can do some shopping or something else. Please tell me the date of your arrival and your flight number so I can meet you at the airport. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua