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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(43):音乐爱好

发布时间:2013-11-19 17:42浏览次数:733
要求:

假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》高中版回音壁的编辑Tom,你收到学生李华的来信。请你根据来信的内容写一封回信,帮他出出主意。

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100-120


Dear editor,
I’m a Senior Three student. I’m unhappy these days. Last Tuesday, I was doing my homework with my favorite MP3 on in Self-Study Class. Suddenly my head teacher took my MP3 away from behind and the next day he scolded me before the whole class. I reasoned with him, only to make things worse. Is there anything wrong enjoying music? What can I do?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
注意:
回信中应包括以下要点:(可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯)
1.你也是音乐爱好者
2.音乐的益处
3.音乐和学习关系的处理
4.老师的意图 
5. 和老师沟通 
用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。

用户练习作文:

Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry that you have trouble with your head teacher. From your letter I know you are a music fan. So it is with me. As you knows, music can be a good companion, which can bring you forgetting worries, happy school. One can’t live without music. No wonder you have a great passion for music. If you enjoy music in a proper time as well as in a proper way, you can keep on studying in a better state. I think you should understand your teacher’s intention.Because he just cared too much about you. You’d better have a heart-to-heart talk with him so that you can understand each other much better. I’m sure music is the bridge to the soul. Good luck! Tom

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