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It is really exciting that our school will offer many optional courses, from which we can choose four. The courses can be listed as follows: sports, music, science, business, literature, drawing, cooking, clothing design, architecture, and film directing. My favorite subject is sports。As a boy，exacting sports make me fell real and exciting。I think it“s so interesting。I like this fell。and i also like music，It“s always make me fell real From my perspective, optional courses can build a bridge , leading us to touch the real world. Not only can we develop our interests, but also put the knowledge into practice. Only in this way can we gain wholesome development.
