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Sports in Our School I am a sunny girl. I like doing sports in my spare time . Every morning ,I get up early to run in the open air.I can hear birds singing and breath fresh air. I am very happy when I do morning erexcises. Sometimes I go to gyms to exercise with my friends.We enjoy ourselves there . I like PE best. At shool, I am the best student in PE. Doing more sports is good for us .Do you want to be a sunny girl like me ?
