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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(21):自信

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Write a composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
自信 (self-confidence) 对一个人来说是非常重要的,但不是每个人都能做到自信。谈谈你的看法。
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The importance of self-confidence  Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day . This does demonstrate the  theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.  It is clear that self-confidence means trust in one's abilities . If you are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties , as a result , your dreams will come true .On the contrary, if you have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything. Failure will be following with you。 It turns out that all your plan falls through .  No one can deny another fact that self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed . You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and self-confidence, the latter in particular. It will exert a profound influence upon the achievement of one's ambitions .  With reference to my standpoint ,I think he that can have self-confidence can have what he will.

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