假设你是某中学的艾运东, 你一直关注和支持在NBA火箭队效力的中国球星姚明。作为姚明的粉丝,你想给他写一封100词左右的英文信,
内容如下:
1.表示崇拜和钦佩(列举理由一二);火箭队 Houston Rockets 季后赛 2009 NBA Playoff
Dear Yao Ming,
I am Ai Yundong from a high school in China. I have always been your loyal fan since you began to play for Houston Rockets.
作者词汇量积累很好,学术词汇积累要重视;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear Yao Ming, I am Ai Yundong from a high school in China. I have always been your loyal fan since you began to play for Houston Rockets. I admire you very much for your great performances in the past seasons. It’s all because of you that I am on fire for basketball. Watching you play gives me much excitement. I learnt from you the importance of teamwork. What fun it is to learn you have helped Rockets into this year’s NBA playoff! And the first post-season match witnessed your strength and victory, which guaranteed a good start towards your way to the NBA championship. I sincerely hope that with you, Rockets will laugh all the way to fulfill your dream. I am even looking forward to your getting the “MVP” award! Wish you success! I’ll be thankful if you are kind enough to send me a photo with your own signature. Best wishes, Yours Ai Yundong