高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown I used to live in a small town there is the small world of my childhood, the home town is surrounded by green trees; The river clear fish play. House humble narrow; Poor people working life; But life is very happy Now, the narrow street high-rise buildings factory store standing; The size of the vehicle along the streets; Industrial development environment deterioration; Trees reduce the fish disappeared; Pollution control priority. I hope I can return to hours, the nature is so beautiful, the bird is very happy