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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17425
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;全文结构较为严谨;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

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today, more and more people recognize the importance of environment protection. last century, people develop industries on the expense of environment and natural resource. Although, people's life level has been raised greatly,at the same time,it brings many environment problems. such as destruction of forests, air pollution, world warming,water pollution and so on.This problems affected people's daily life all over the world.We found many kinds of animal extinguished in this tens of years, and many diseases which never be heard before become broadcasting. How can we live on the earth if the atmosphere temperature rise up to 50 degree c or acid rains destroyed the land continually. Nowadays, more and more policies have be toke for protecting environment. Majority of people realized we must use natural resource reasonably and only by this way,we can have a continual development. For example, in these years, people try their best to make balance between develop economy and protect environment,and government pay lots of money to develop the clear energy such as solar energy, windy energy, hydrogen energy and so on. From the view of my point, if everyone pay attention to protecting environment and saving natural resource, we can eliminate the bad influence of destroy environment in tens years.

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