初中英语命题作文真题演练(65):烟民

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Smoking has become a big problem for some Chinese students．It is said that more than21% of middle school students and 6% of primary school students smoke． As we all know, smoking is harmful to people's health, but why do teenagers smoke? An important reason is that smoking is cool． It makes them feel like "real men"． Now more and more people in the world have given up smoking or have decided to do so．I think young people who are smoking should give it up．