初中英语命题作文真题演练(62):试卷

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This paper without a name can’t be a boy’s because a boy’s paper can’t be so tidy，It must belong to a girl but only three girls have good handwriting—Lily，Mary and Alice．The paper can’t belong to Lily because she is not good at English．It might be Mary’s for she is one of the top students in our class and does well in English．But the problem is that she has found her paper in her desk well in English．But the problem is that she has found her paper in her desk．So it must belong to Alice．She likes English and does better in English than any other student in our class．And now she hasn’t got her paper yet．So the paper with a full mark must be Alice’s．