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4．Mike：the captain of the soccer tam in Junior 3．I can’t decide to play or not to play on the team．
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Now english is more important.So many paople study english，but them don‘t how study english well. Let me Introduce the way to learn English. I Learning English for more than three years. At first think English difficult to learn, pronunciation is bad, not grammar rules, then, with the help of the teachers and students have made great progress.And My experience：In a short period of time to obtain the best study effect, requires painstaking efforts. Inside and outside class to listen, speak, read and write.I suggest you can spend your free time watch English TV，and so on.
