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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5479
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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As we see,some people believe that the lucky number can bring them good luck.That is really?We all know,the information are from entertainment of TV show or magic book.There just want to appeal to audience's eyes so that increase business income.For example,some number of six,seven,two that could bring good luck in their mind. As a matter of fact,this isn't scientific.The following of reason are those:First how many successful people who succeed is due to the lucky numbers bring them to be?The answer is Noboby.They struggle for their dream with their two hands.Second,the chance is leaving for who people has prepared forever,do not to waiting for good luck basis on lucky number. I think the lucky is always not connect with the number,we should insist on believe science.

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