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I have an announcement to make. A party is going to be held by the Class Committee on Friday evening, April 15, to welcome our friends from England. The party will begin at 7:00 pm and end at 10:00 pm in he meeting hall of our school. There will be all kinds of activities, such as listening to music, dancing, singing, and playing games. The most exciting program will be the exchange of presents. Please bring a small gift with you. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words expressing good wishes. Thank you.