2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(82):重返校园

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Dear Mr. Smith, I’m glad to have received your money and gifts. Now I can go to school again. I am very happy and thank you very much. I have been studying hard since I accepted your gifts. Thanks to the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress in my studies. So our teachers praised me for it and my parents encouraged me. I have made up my mind to study harder than before to learn every subject well. I want to be a scientist in the future. I’m looking forward to seeing you, but I have no chance to go to Shanghai myself. I hope you can post me a photo of yours. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ying