高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport is basketball.After class, I often play it with my friends.Playing basketball is very interesting.We usaully play it happily.After school,my father plays basketball with me.My father often says playing basketball is good for my health. And I believe I can do somethings with my country. This is a good start, for each of us.