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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。
Dear Classmates, I think it is very necessary for us to talk about friendship at the meeting today. In life, friendship is very important. Some people think that with the violation of school discipline, such as bullying, smoke or drink together, protect your classmates is friendship. This view is wrong. True friendship concept: love the collective, help each other, and common progress.
