2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(104):澳大利亚行

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Dear Mr and Mrs John， I've been back in Beijing. Thank you very much for your warm reception. When your whole family to greet me when I was very moved by the airport. Jenny always visit places of historic interest and scenic beauty. He also introduced me to the local local customs and practices. I am very happy in Australia. Thank you for one family. Welcome to Beijing guest. You will fall in love with Beijing.