2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(33):学生使用手机

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Dear Editor, Now more and more students use mobile phones. First they think it is fashionable to own a mobile phone. Second they think it is easier for them to contact their family and friends. Some of them take the mobile phones to the classrooms. So you can hear the ringing of mobile phones. That break the rules of class. Some of the students even send text messages in class. They waste too much time on it. So I hope your magazine can say something to the students and ask them to stop using mobile phones at school. Yours Wang Li