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I was a high school student, my name is Wang Fei. I want to be with your newspaper about students use mobile phone case. Now many students think it's a fashion two is that the ease of contact with family and friends some students put the mobile phone into the classroom with the use of mobile phone, mobile phone is often heard ringing in class. Violate discipline. Send messages to the students in the classroom, wasting precious time. I suggest: the classroom is a place to learn, need to be quiet; students should not use mobile phone in the classroom; they should concentrate on learning
