词数100左右;不要逐字翻译;开头句已经给出,不计入总词数内。
Dear editor,
单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear editor, Nowadays, some of us students have formed some bad habits on campus.For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, or let water running after washing.Some leave over much food on the table after eating.Besides, waste paper can be seen everywhere. It is well known that these bad habits will have a bad influence on our character and behavior.What's worse, they can not only increase our cost at school and add financial burden to our parents, but also waste the limited resources. So to build a resource-saving campus it is high time that we had to deal with the problems.In my opinion, we should start with ourselves to save everything.I'd like to remind my classmates to take the lead in reducing the waste.We must form some good habits.For example, when we brush our teeth and wash hands, never leave water running unnecessarily and when we leave classrooms, we should make sure that the lights have been turned off. Yours, LiHua