2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(35):没有朋友的苦恼

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Dear David: Nice to get your letter.How are things going now?From your letter,I know that you are very anxious about friends.I am very worried about that,too.But if you are not against,I would like to give you some tips on how to make friends with the other people.From my personal experience, I think you should be self_confident and polite.Nobody wants to make friends with those who are always nervous. Meanwhile, you should keep being yourself with your speciality.A person who is special and differnt is always popular.Also,you should always keep in touch with your friends .Never make your friends disappointed.Then you will be welcome by the people around you. I hope you can make a lot of good friends and be a happy boy Yours truly, Tom