托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第35篇:在社区建学校的优缺点

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Recently, the government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. It brings us the advantages, but brings us the disadvantages as well that establishing a new university in our community. First, college students can promote the economic development of the surrounding to improve the human environment. College students is a spending power of the group. Once established a university in our community, students will become the main target consumer groups around the business, including bookstores, restaurants, coffee shops etc. Accordingly, students can also improve the surrounding cultural environment. But, too many people can feel crowed, this is the second point, it is disadvantages to establish a university in community. Second, after the population increased, people will feel crowed, noisy, dirty and disorder. Especially college students have two holidays. There are a lot of students in community during the beginning of university, and there is nobody on campus during the holiday. The population change as pendulum will make people uncomfortable. In a word, established a new university in community can bring benefits can also disadvantages for local.