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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；请注意分段。
Nowadays,we from the survey that education pays stand money earning.first of all,less than high school diploma of meidian weekly earning less than doctoral degree's one third ,but we could recognise the more education pays the more gaining, however the degree don't represent nearning high,afterall,the boss pay attention to your skills rather than anything else.if you get better learned habits that you have bright further.
